Our short fiction series continues. This month’s special theme is London Razed, visions of the city’s destruction in the past, present or future. This week, David Ritchie attempts some self-selected destruction.
The Man From BEER
Harrington Soames of 18 Puddingchop Lane, retiree and grower of prize azaleas, was going out to walk his basset hound Jeeves when a large man in a gray suit appeared, out of thin air, in front of him. The man carried a small black object like a cell phone in one hand.
‘Mr. Harrington Soames?’ the man asked.
‘Yes,’ Soames replied.
‘Good morning, sir. I am from the Bureau of Edited Existence and Realities, or BEER.’
‘I’ve nothing against beer,’ Soames replied. ‘What do you do?’
‘We monitor your thinking, sir,’ the man explained. ‘And we’re eliminating the parts of your world that you don’t think about.’
‘On principle, sir. Everything has its existence in the mind. So if you don’t think about something, then it doesn’t exist. There’s no need to keep something that doesn’t exist, is there?’
‘Very well,’ Soames told him. ‘If I don’t think about things, they’re no great loss, are they?’
‘Precisely, sir. They’re unnecessary for you. So we’ve edited them out. They no longer exist. Look!’
The man gestured toward the ends of Puddingchop Lane. At either end, London had ceased to exist. A black plain extended as far as the eye could see.
‘Well,’ Soames said. ‘The rest of London is gone, then?’
‘For you it is,’ the man said.
Soames shrugged. ‘I don’t feel any different,’ he said.
‘Nor should you expect to, sir. Now, we wish to ask you a few questions, please.’
‘Go ahead,’ Soames said.
‘When did you cease to care?’
‘The rest of London. The rest of the world.’
‘About the time my wife died,’ Soames recalled. ‘I was alone at home after that. Everything I needed was here on Puddingchop Lane – the bank, the market, the coffee shop, the doctor. All my friends and neighbors were here too – Mrs. Somerset on the corner, the Singh family next door, and the rest. So I stopped going beyond Puddingchop Lane.’
‘And at the same time, you stopped thinking beyond Puddingchop Lane,’ the BEER man pointed out. It was not an accusation; just a statement of fact.
‘Well, yes,’ Soames acknowledged. ‘That too.’
‘There was no need. I have my home, my garden, my dog, and my neighbors. Everything I need is here. Anything beyond that is too much.’
‘Understood, sir.’ The man was tapping away at his little device. ‘A few more questions, if I may.’
‘Do you read newspapers?’
Soames shook his gray head. “All lies!’ he said.
‘Do you watch television?’
‘Too much noise.’
‘Do you have internet access?’
‘Why? The neighbors tell me it’s just children chatting.’
‘Then what occupies your time, sir?’
‘The garden. Meals. Shopping at the market. Walking Jeeves, here.’ He gestured to the basset hound, who seemed not to notice the BEER man at all.
‘As I said, the rest of your London is gone, sir. If you could restore it, would you do so?’
‘Never,’ Soames said. ‘Good riddance to it. A paradise of thieves, it is … or was.’
‘Then do you wish us to make its deletion permanent?’
‘May as well,’ said Soames with a shrug. ‘Never did me any good.’
‘I’m required to point out to you what you will lose in that case,’ the man went on. ‘The British Museum. The London Eye. Trafalgar Square. Piccadilly. Baker Street. You will lose all of them, and more – all the historic and cultural heritage of a great city. Don’t you wish to save some parts of it?’
‘Not at all. What good did Nelson on his column ever do me?’
A few more taps, and the BEER man was finished.
‘All done, sir,’ he said. ‘For you, the rest of London has ceased to exist, permanently. As you wished.’
‘Good,’ said Soames. ‘But would you do one thing?’
‘If we can, sir,’ the BEER man said.
Soames gestured at the black plain that started where the lane ended.
‘Could you make it some other color?’ he asked. ‘I’ve never liked black. It’s depressing.’
‘Agreed, sir. How is white?’
An additional tap on the gadget, and the plain turned white.
‘Nice,’ Soames said.
‘That concludes our business, sir,’ said the BEER man. ‘In a moment, I have to leave you and meet a lady who probably will ask me to wipe out her Birmingham. Have you any questions?’
‘Just one. You wiped out most of London. Do you feel sad?’
‘No, sir. We don’t cry in our BEER.’
‘Good,’ Soames said. ‘No sentimentalism.’
‘ Besides, sir, it was your London. Not mine.’
‘I see. Well, thank you.’
‘Good day,’ said the BEER man, and disappeared.
Jeeves did his business. Soames scooped it up and disposed of it. Then Soames – the destroyer of London – returned to his house and garden. His azaleas needed tending.
Copyright, David Ritchie, 2014. @EGhostwriter
We’re still looking for London short fiction stories. Over the next month or two, as a special theme, we’re particularly looking for stories in which London is destroyed. Please send submissions to email@example.com. Entries must be no more than 1,000 words, and must be set in London, or strongly inspired by the city. Full details here.
Previously in this series
- Blackout on Fen Street: Seth Insua wishes away the city.
- Amelie: Narges Rashidi considers the interactions of three people on a District Line tube.
- Shelter Drawings: Stuart Snelson’s tale of a mysterious Circle Line artist.
- Tracks and Albums: Richard Lakin attracts the attentions of the British Transport Police.
- Seeing Red: Anthony Fitzgerald on the woes of a cab driver.
- Instant Karma on the 263 to North Finchley: one seat left on the bus. Next to you. Raving drunk gets on. By Ronnie Capaldi.
- Two Four Eight: Lance V Ramsay envisions an Orwellian dystopia in the lingo of future London.
- Old Nichol: Jill Fricker evokes the woes of the old East End.
- Clissar: Grazia Brunello dips into the future of north London, through a glass darkly.
- Harvest Festival: A spooky Halloween tale in the London suburbs by Helen Craig.
- Ordinary Days in London: Madelaine Hills on a Docklands disturbance.
- Bishopsgate: Oliver Zarandi visits the site of a bomb.
- The Perfect Gift: A Christmas fairytale in which London’s statues come to life, by Katherine Wheston.
- The City Inside: Tom Butler has some curious metropolitan anatomy.
- Jazz Code and the Tube: The ambivalence of dating, by Jenny Mackenzie.
- A Free Man: Melanie White’s flash fiction piece considers a recently single guy at a bachelor party.
- Clean Living London: Ursula Dewey rolls her sleeves up for some housework.
- Swipe Right: Does Tinder have the answers? By Heidi Scherz
- The Writer and the Dancer: Close encounter at a flat party by Vincent Wood.
- St Peter’s Gate, Knightsbridge: A nocturnal romance at closing time, by Theo Klay
- First: A romance begins inside a London gay club. By Lance Middleton.
- Natural Disasters: Can you find love at the supermarket checkout, when your customer’s buying porn? Yoel Noorali enquires.
- NO! SUSHI: A relationship breaks down during a Japanese leaving party, by Clare Kane.
- Compatibility: Stephen Lynch conjures the awkwardness of flat hunting.
- An Extract From the Diary of Kay Richardson, Actor: The surreal tribulations of a washed-up London thesp, by Tom Mitchell.
- The Further Adventures of Kay Richardson, Actor: More from the feckless thesp, by Tom Mitchell.
- You Were Not In When We Called: A Christmas tale from Megan Toogood.
- The Do: Alan Fisher gets party phobia.